Thread: Grammar/punctuation fixes
Hi,
I'd like to submit some grammar/punctuation fixes for the PostgreSQL website. Is a pull request permitted or should I discuss proposed changes here first?
The changes mainly involve correct use of commas and semicolons.
Thanks,
Anthony DeBarros
On 8/5/24 5:46 PM, Anthony DeBarros wrote: > Hi, > > I'd like to submit some grammar/punctuation fixes for the PostgreSQL > website. Is a pull request permitted or should I discuss proposed > changes here first? > > The changes mainly involve correct use of commas and semicolons. Discussing here is fine - bonus points for attaching a diff with the changes :) Thanks, Jonathan
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Hello,
On Aug 5, 2024 at 9:48:47 PM, Jonathan S. Katz <jkatz@postgresql.org> wrote:
On 8/5/24 5:46 PM, Anthony DeBarros wrote:Hi,I'd like to submit some grammar/punctuation fixes for the PostgreSQLwebsite. Is a pull request permitted or should I discuss proposedchanges here first?The changes mainly involve correct use of commas and semicolons.
Discussing here is fine - bonus points for attaching a diff with the
changes :)
Thanks,
Jonathan
Respectfully submitting a patch to make the download pages about macOS and Windows more readable via some minor edits.
On the Windows download page[1] and macOS download page[2]:
- Transform the paragraph of items included in the EDB installer into a list for readability.
- Split a long sentence in two.
- Trim some wordiness/redundancies.
- Remove italics around “Advanced users”.
Thank you for considering,
Anthony DeBarros
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Hi
On Sat, 10 Aug 2024 at 18:52, Anthony DeBarros <anthonymdebarros@gmail.com> wrote:
Respectfully submitting a patch to make the download pages about macOS and Windows more readable via some minor edits.On the Windows download page[1] and macOS download page[2]:
- Transform the paragraph of items included in the EDB installer into a list for readability.
- Split a long sentence in two.
- Trim some wordiness/redundancies.
- Remove italics around “Advanced users”.
Thanks - patch committed!
Dave Page
pgAdmin: https://www.pgadmin.org
You're welcome. If you like that general approach -- minimal edits focused on readability/brevity -- I'd be glad to look for other places on the site for edits.
On Mon, Aug 12, 2024 at 9:40 AM Dave Page <dpage@pgadmin.org> wrote:
HiOn Sat, 10 Aug 2024 at 18:52, Anthony DeBarros <anthonymdebarros@gmail.com> wrote:Respectfully submitting a patch to make the download pages about macOS and Windows more readable via some minor edits.On the Windows download page[1] and macOS download page[2]:
- Transform the paragraph of items included in the EDB installer into a list for readability.
- Split a long sentence in two.
- Trim some wordiness/redundancies.
- Remove italics around “Advanced users”.
Thanks - patch committed!--Dave PagepgAdmin: https://www.pgadmin.org
On Mon, 12 Aug 2024 at 15:26, Anthony DeBarros <anthonymdebarros@gmail.com> wrote:
You're welcome. If you like that general approach -- minimal edits focused on readability/brevity -- I'd be glad to look for other places on the site for edits.
Please feel free. Improvements to readability are always welcome.
Thanks!
On Mon, Aug 12, 2024 at 9:40 AM Dave Page <dpage@pgadmin.org> wrote:HiOn Sat, 10 Aug 2024 at 18:52, Anthony DeBarros <anthonymdebarros@gmail.com> wrote:Respectfully submitting a patch to make the download pages about macOS and Windows more readable via some minor edits.On the Windows download page[1] and macOS download page[2]:
- Transform the paragraph of items included in the EDB installer into a list for readability.
- Split a long sentence in two.
- Trim some wordiness/redundancies.
- Remove italics around “Advanced users”.
Thanks - patch committed!--Dave PagepgAdmin: https://www.pgadmin.org
Dave Page
pgAdmin: https://www.pgadmin.org
On 8/12/24 10:30 AM, Dave Page wrote: > > > On Mon, 12 Aug 2024 at 15:26, Anthony DeBarros > <anthonymdebarros@gmail.com <mailto:anthonymdebarros@gmail.com>> wrote: > > You're welcome. If you like that general approach -- minimal edits > focused on readability/brevity -- I'd be glad to look for other > places on the site for edits. > > > Please feel free. Improvements to readability are always welcome. +1; thanks Anthony! Jonathan