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From Anthony DeBarros
Subject Re: Grammar/punctuation fixes
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In response to Re: Grammar/punctuation fixes  (Dave Page <dpage@pgadmin.org>)
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You're welcome. If you like that general approach -- minimal edits focused on readability/brevity -- I'd be glad to look for other places on the site for edits.

On Mon, Aug 12, 2024 at 9:40 AM Dave Page <dpage@pgadmin.org> wrote:
Hi

On Sat, 10 Aug 2024 at 18:52, Anthony DeBarros <anthonymdebarros@gmail.com> wrote:

Respectfully submitting a patch to make the download pages about macOS and Windows more readable via some minor edits.

On the Windows download page[1] and macOS download page[2]:

  • Transform the paragraph of items included in the EDB installer into a list for readability.
  • Split a long sentence in two.
  • Trim some wordiness/redundancies.
  • Remove italics around “Advanced users”.


Thanks - patch committed!

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