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From Anthony DeBarros
Subject Re: Grammar/punctuation fixes
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Msg-id CACJO+64vk7zOZXxBFKXOkY3+Kzb75923K2GWCe4MzLa412MXZA@mail.gmail.com
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Hello,

On Aug 5, 2024 at 9:48:47 PM, Jonathan S. Katz <jkatz@postgresql.org> wrote:
On 8/5/24 5:46 PM, Anthony DeBarros wrote:
Hi,

I'd like to submit some grammar/punctuation fixes for the PostgreSQL
website. Is a pull request permitted or should I discuss proposed
changes here first?

The changes mainly involve correct use of commas and semicolons.

Discussing here is fine - bonus points for attaching a diff with the
changes :)

Thanks,

Jonathan


Respectfully submitting a patch to make the download pages about macOS and Windows more readable via some minor edits.

On the Windows download page[1] and macOS download page[2]:

  • Transform the paragraph of items included in the EDB installer into a list for readability.
  • Split a long sentence in two.
  • Trim some wordiness/redundancies.
  • Remove italics around “Advanced users”.


Thank you for considering,
Anthony DeBarros

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