Re: Release, 3rd draft - Mailing list pgsql-advocacy

From Lance Obermeyer
Subject Re: Release, 3rd draft
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In response to Release, 3rd draft  (Josh Berkus <josh@agliodbs.com>)
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I'm wondering about the second paragraph, which is

These features will continue the adoption trend established by
PostgreSQL 8.0. Designed, built and tested by a large and thriving
community and backed by a growing number of corporate sponsors and support
companies, PostgreSQL enjoys growing user interest. Version 8.0 has been downloaded
1 million times in its first 7 months.  This compares with about 300,000
over a similar period for the prior release.

ISTM that the second sentence in the paragraph is misplaced.  It is certainly true that PG is the work of a community,
andthat should be said.  However, it is stuck in between two sentences about adoption.  Perhaps the sentence should be
movedinto the first paragraph? 

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