Thread: Minor improvement in sentences to enhance readability
It is your prerogative to accept or reject
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If you are upgrading an existing system be sure to read Section 18.6, which has instructions about upgrading a cluster.
Proposed
If you are upgrading an existing system, be sure to read Section 18.6, which has instructions about upgrading a cluster.
Hi,
Suggesting minor improvements in https://www.postgresql.org/docs/17/install-make.html
to enhance readability.
Change
Added comma between "system and be"
--To keep the text consistent, built might be replaced by build.
Actual Text
If you built with debugging support, stripping will effectively remove the debugging support
Proposed
If you build with debugging support, stripping will effectively remove the debugging support
Change
Replaced built by build
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All files will be installed under
/usr/local/pgsql by default.Proposed
By default, all files will be installed under
/usr/local/pgsql.Actual Text
(Remember to use GNU make.) The build will take a few minutes depending on your hardware.
Proposed
The build will take a few minutes, depending on your hardware (remember to use GNU make).
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use ./configure --help to get one that is
Proposed
use ./configure --help to see all options.
or
use ./configure --help to list all options.
Regards,
Muhammad Ikram,
Bitnine Global