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From	Muhammad Ikram
Subject	Minor improvement in sentences to enhance readability
Date	June 13 11:34:46
Msg-id	CAGeimVoKM6YoEEX2hMQG2PcBXA4DYGxqJow8aM8dDsSADKC8=w@mail.gmail.com Whole thread Raw
List	pgsql-docs

Here are some minor change suggestions which may help in improving readability.

It is your prerogative to accept or reject

Actual Text

If you are upgrading an existing system be sure to read Section 18.6, which has instructions about upgrading a cluster.

Proposed

If you are upgrading an existing system, be sure to read Section 18.6, which has instructions about upgrading a cluster.

Hi,

to enhance readability.

Change

Added comma between "system and be"

To keep the text consistent, built might be replaced by build.

Actual Text

If you built with debugging support, stripping will effectively remove the debugging support

Proposed

If you build with debugging support, stripping will effectively remove the debugging support

Change

Replaced built by build

Actual Text

All files will be installed under /usr/local/pgsql by default.

Proposed

By default, all files will be installed under /usr/local/pgsql.

Actual Text

(Remember to use GNU make.) The build will take a few minutes depending on your hardware.

Proposed

The build will take a few minutes, depending on your hardware (remember to use GNU make).

Actual Text

use ./configure --help to get one that is

Proposed

use ./configure --help to see all options.

use ./configure --help to list all options.

Regards,

Muhammad Ikram,

Bitnine Global

From: Will Mortensen
Date: 12 June, 04:20:42
Subject: Re: Documenting more pitfalls of non-default collations?

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