From: Fujii Masao <masao.fujii@oss.nttdata.com>
Sent: Wednesday, July 3, 2024 7:44 PM
>
> On 2024/07/03 17:51, Hajime.Matsunaga@nttdata.com wrote:
> > Thanks for the suggestions the other day.
> > I have created a patch that incorporates your suggestions.
>
> - <structname>pg_stat_database</structname></link>, in the output of
> + <structname>pg_stat_database</structname></link> and
> + <link linkend="monitoring-pg-stat-io-view">
> + <structname>pg_stat_io</structname></link>, in the output of
>
> I'm not a native English speaker, but it seems more natural to use a comma instead of "and" before "pg_stat_io."
>
> - of block read and write times.
> + of block read, block write, extend, and fsync times.
>
> "block" before "fsync" doesn't seem necessary.
I'm also not a native English speaker, so I appreciate your feedback.
I have created a patch that incorporates your feedback.
Regards,
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Hajime Matsunaga
NTT DATA Group Corporation
