Re: Doc: fix track_io_timing description to mention pg_stat_io - Mailing list pgsql-hackers

On 2024/07/03 17:51, Hajime.Matsunaga@nttdata.com wrote:
> Thanks for the suggestions the other day.
> I have created a patch that incorporates your suggestions.

-        <structname>pg_stat_database</structname></link>, in the output of
+        <structname>pg_stat_database</structname></link> and
+        <link linkend="monitoring-pg-stat-io-view">
+        <structname>pg_stat_io</structname></link>, in the output of

I'm not a native English speaker, but it seems more natural to use a comma instead of "and" before "pg_stat_io."

-   of block read and write times.
+   of block read, block write, extend, and fsync times.

"block" before "fsync" doesn't seem necessary.

Regards,

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