Re: 7.4 release news item on postgresql.org - Mailing list pgsql-advocacy

From Paul Ganainm
Subject Re: 7.4 release news item on postgresql.org
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Msg-id MPG.1a3a910420a89b3e9896a7@news.gmane.org
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In response to Re: 7.4 release news item on postgresql.org  ("Merlin Moncure" <merlin.moncure@rcsonline.com>)
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merlin.moncure@rcsonline.com says...

> > Thanks, but a critique doesn't do us much good if you don't supply
> > alternate
> > text.  How about you just re-write the paragraph and I'll post it?

> My pleasure.

> Original:
> Version 7.4 has been released after a long testing period, due to the
> rather large number of new "enterprise" features we have. Click download
> links above to download it, or read more to find out about our new
> features.

> Revised:
> After twelve months of development an extended testing period,


After twelve months of development and an extended testing period,


Note addition an "and".


Paul...


> Merlin

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