* I don't believe that the FSM truncation issue is specific to being "in recovery". The corruption itself would happen during crash/restart on a master, or while a standby is following a WAL stream, but the effects would be seen later. Suggest just taking out "in recovery" from the description.
* Please clarify that the pg_upgrade VM issue is only in 9.6.0.
* The recipe for recovery from the VM issue is oversimplified. Rather than trying to explain how to fix it here, I'd suggest pointing to the wiki page we've created about that, https://wiki.postgresql.org/wiki/Visibility_Map_Problems