Below are my review comments for the v3 patch.
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1. Commit message
(An earlier review comment [Peter-v2] #2 was only partly fixed)
"there are no longer any relation information" --> "there is no longer
any relation information"
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2. doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml
+
<entry><structname>pg_stat_subscription_activity</structname><indexterm><primary>pg_stat_subscription_activity</primary></indexterm></entry>
+ <entry>One row per subscription, showing statistics about subscription
+ activity.
+ See <link linkend="monitoring-pg-stat-subscription-activity">
+ <structname>pg_stat_subscription_activity</structname></link>
for details.
</entry>
</row>
Currently these stats are only about errors. These are not really
statistics about "activity" though. Probably it is better just to
avoid that word altogether?
SUGGESTIONS
e.g.1. "One row per subscription, showing statistics about
subscription activity." --> "One row per subscription, showing
statistics about errors."
e.g.2. "One row per subscription, showing statistics about
subscription activity." --> "One row per subscription, showing
statistics about that subscription."
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[Peter-v2]
https://www.postgresql.org/message-id/CAHut%2BPv%3DVmXtHmPKp4fg8VDF%2BTQP6xWgL91Jn-hrqg5QObfCZA%40mail.gmail.com
Kind Regards,
Peter Smith.
Fujitsu Australia
