On Thu, Mar 30, 2023 at 11:54 PM David Rowley <dgrowleyml@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> On Mon, 20 Mar 2023 at 11:50, Melanie Plageman
> <melanieplageman@gmail.com> wrote:
> > Attached is an updated v6.
>
> I had a look over the v6-0001 patch. There are a few things I think
> could be done better:
>
> "Some operations will access a large number of pages at a time", does
> this really need "at a time"? I think it's more relevant that the
> operation uses a large number of pages.
>
> Missing <firstterm> around Buffer Access Strategy.
>
> Various things could be linked to other sections of the glossary, e.g.
> pages could link to glossary-data-page, shared buffers could link to
> glossary-shared-memory and WAL could link to glossary-wal.
>
> The final paragraph should have <command> tags around the various
> commands that you list.
>
> I have adjusted those and slightly reworded a few other things. See
> the attached .diff which can be applied atop of v6-0001.
There was one small typo keeping this from compiling. Also a repeated
word. I've fixed these. I also edited a bit of indentation and tweaked
some wording. Diff attached (to be applied on top of your diff).
- Melanie