Christoph Berg <myon@debian.org> writes:
> Re: To Daniel Gustafsson
>> "string containing" is again pretty boilerplatish, how about just
>> "contains"?
>
> Actually, just omitting the whole prefix works best.
>
> TG_WHEN (text)
>
> BEFORE, AFTER, or INSTEAD OF, depending on the trigger's definition.
The attached patch does not reflect this, did you attach an old version?
> I also shortened some "name of table" to just "table". Since the data
> type is "name", it's clear what "table" means.
I think it reads better with the definite article and initial capital,
e.g. "The table that triggered ….".
> <variablelist>
> <varlistentry>
> - <term><varname>NEW</varname></term>
> + <term><varname>NEW</varname> (record)</term>
The type names should still be wrapped in <type>, like they were before.
- ilmari