On Fri, Aug 21, 2020 at 07:42:35PM -0700, David G. Johnston wrote:
> On Fri, Aug 21, 2020 at 3:52 PM Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us> wrote:
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> > Agreed, this doc area needs help.
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> I developed the attached patach for this. Is this sufficient?
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> For consistency I would change "statement" to "command" at the end of that
> paragraph .
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> the <xref linkend="sql-call"/> command.
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> and to contrast with "a part of" I would modify the following fragment to read:
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> a procedure is called in isolation
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> Taken together:
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> While a function is called as part of a query or DML command, a procedure is
> called in isolation using the <xref linked="sql-call"/> command.
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> And then swap the order of, and tweak, the transaction and isolation sentences:
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> [...] the CALL command. If the CALL command is not part of an explicit
> transaction a procedure can also manage multiple transactions during its
> execution.
OK, how is this updated patch?
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