On Thu, Jul 21, 2016 at 10:11:00PM +0900, Michael Paquier wrote:
> On Thu, Jul 21, 2016 at 3:07 AM, Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us> wrote:
> > I was confused by pg_rewind's ability to use a remote source server, and
> > another core team member was confused as well, so I figured I should
> > update the pg_rewind docs to be clearer.
> >
> > Attached is a patch to do that.
>
> This is a clean set of improvements.
>
> - <xref linkend="guc-full-page-writes"> must also be enabled. That is the
> - default.
> + <xref linkend="guc-full-page-writes"> must also be on, but it is
> + enabled by default.
> Perhaps you should add a <literal> markup around "on"? And say "must
> be also set to on"
Well, "must also be on" isn't using "on" as a literal, but "must be also
set to on" does use it as a literal, and I changed the text to that.
> - with superuser access. This option requires the server to be running
> - and not in recovery mode.
> + with superuser access. This option requires the local or remote
> + server to be running and not in recovery mode.
> I don't think that "local or remote" is an improvement here. You could
> just say "source".
I was trying to highlight that the source can be remote with
--source-server. I have change it to what you suggested. Is it stil
clear?
> + Copy all other files such as <filename>clog</filename> and
> clog is not a term used a lot in the docs. It may be better to refer
> to pg_clog, or transaction status data.
Agreed, changed to "pg_clog".
Updated patch attached.
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