Thread: Typo in parallel.sqml

Typo in parallel.sqml

From
Tatsuo Ishii
Date:
I think this is a typo. Since I am not an English native speaker, I
would appreciate if someone confirm this.

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/parallel.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/parallel.sgml
index 7f8e902..02173da 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/parallel.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/parallel.sgml
@@ -339,7 +339,7 @@ EXPLAIN SELECT * FROM pgbench_accounts WHERE filler LIKE '%x%';  <para>    When executing a
parallelplan, you can use <literal>EXPLAIN (ANALYZE,
 
-    VERBOSE)</literal> will display per-worker statistics for each plan node.
+    VERBOSE)</literal> to display per-worker statistics for each plan node.    This may be useful in determining
whetherthe work is being evenly    distributed between all plan nodes and more generally in understanding the
performancecharacteristics of the plan.
 

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Tatsuo Ishii
SRA OSS, Inc. Japan
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Re: Typo in parallel.sqml

From
Michael Paquier
Date:
On Fri, Oct 14, 2016 at 8:41 AM, Tatsuo Ishii <ishii@sraoss.co.jp> wrote:
> diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/parallel.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/parallel.sgml
> index 7f8e902..02173da 100644
> --- a/doc/src/sgml/parallel.sgml
> +++ b/doc/src/sgml/parallel.sgml
> @@ -339,7 +339,7 @@ EXPLAIN SELECT * FROM pgbench_accounts WHERE filler LIKE '%x%';
>
>    <para>
>      When executing a parallel plan, you can use <literal>EXPLAIN (ANALYZE,
> -    VERBOSE)</literal> will display per-worker statistics for each plan node.
> +    VERBOSE)</literal> to display per-worker statistics for each plan node.
>      This may be useful in determining whether the work is being evenly
>      distributed between all plan nodes and more generally in understanding the
>      performance characteristics of the plan.

Indeed. It looks like a bad copy-pasto of two sentences gathered together.
-- 
Michael



Re: Typo in parallel.sqml

From
Tatsuo Ishii
Date:
> Indeed. It looks like a bad copy-pasto of two sentences gathered together.

Thanks! I will commit/push to master and 9.6 stable branches.

Best regards,
--
Tatsuo Ishii
SRA OSS, Inc. Japan
English: http://www.sraoss.co.jp/index_en.php
Japanese:http://www.sraoss.co.jp