Thread: more doc improvements

more doc improvements

From
Neil Conway
Date:
This patch makes the following changes to the documentation:

- more work from the SGML police

- some grammar improvements: rewriting a paragraph or two, replacing
contractions where (IMHO) appropriate

- fix missing utility commands in lock mode docs

- improve CLUSTER, REINDEX, SET SESSION AUTHORIZATION ref pages

Cheers,

Neil
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Re: more doc improvements

From
Bruce Momjian
Date:
Your patch has been added to the PostgreSQL unapplied patches list at:

    http://momjian.postgresql.org/cgi-bin/pgpatches

I will try to apply it within the next 48 hours.

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Neil Conway wrote:
> This patch makes the following changes to the documentation:
>
> - more work from the SGML police
>
> - some grammar improvements: rewriting a paragraph or two, replacing
> contractions where (IMHO) appropriate
>
> - fix missing utility commands in lock mode docs
>
> - improve CLUSTER, REINDEX, SET SESSION AUTHORIZATION ref pages
>
> Cheers,
>
> Neil
> --
> Neil Conway <neilc@samurai.com> || PGP Key ID: DB3C29FC
>
>

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Re: more doc improvements

From
Bruce Momjian
Date:
Patch applied.  Thanks.

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Neil Conway wrote:
> This patch makes the following changes to the documentation:
>
> - more work from the SGML police
>
> - some grammar improvements: rewriting a paragraph or two, replacing
> contractions where (IMHO) appropriate
>
> - fix missing utility commands in lock mode docs
>
> - improve CLUSTER, REINDEX, SET SESSION AUTHORIZATION ref pages
>
> Cheers,
>
> Neil
> --
> Neil Conway <neilc@samurai.com> || PGP Key ID: DB3C29FC
>
>

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