Thread: Re: Press Release, Final Draft?

Re: Press Release, Final Draft?

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Josh Berkus <josh@agliodbs.com> wrote on 22.09.2004, 01:30:44:
> Here's my synthesis for the final draft of the press release.    In order to
> get some of the quotes I want, it has to be more-or-less finished by THURSDAY
> NIGHT.   So please give your feedback on what version of the text to use or
> any changes you want to see.
>

Looks good to me. Let's go with your new paragraphs all the way.

Expertly polished version of (the other) Josh's already fine efforts.

Best Regards, Simon Riggs