On 2019/02/22 1:41, Pavel Stehule wrote:
> čt 21. 2. 2019 v 0:56 odesílatel Justin Pryzby <pryzby@telsasoft.com>
> napsal:
>
>> On Sat, Feb 16, 2019 at 10:52:35PM +0100, Pavel Stehule wrote:
>>> I like your changes. I merged all - updated patch is attached
>>
>> I applied and tested your v10 patch.
>>
>> Find attached some light modifications.
>>
>
> I have not any objection - I cannot to evaluate. It is question for some
> native speaker.
Not a native speaker either, but I like Justin's changes. Although I
noticed that he missed changing one sentence to look like other similar
sentences.
What Justin did:
- indexes) and associated description are also displayed.
+ indexes) is displayed, as is the relation's description.
</para>
What I think he meant to do:
- indexes) and associated description are also displayed.
+ indexes) is also displayed, along with the associated description.
</para>
> I am not sure if we use labels in form "some: detail" somewhere.
I haven't seen column names like that either. How about:
- gettext_noop("Direct partitions size"));
+ gettext_noop("Leaf partition size"));
- gettext_noop("Total partitions size"));
+ gettext_noop("Total size"));
- gettext_noop("Partitions size"));
+ gettext_noop("Total size"));
I've attached v11 of the patch, which merges most of Justin's changes and
some of my own on top -- documentation and partition size column names.
Thanks,
Amit
