On Fri, 2024-09-20 at 13:47 -0400, Jonathan S. Katz wrote:
> Please see attached.
> + <listitem>
> + <para>
> + Various query performance improvements, including to sequential reads
> + using streaming I/O, write throughput under high concurrency, and
> + searches over multiple values in a <link linkend="btree">btree</link>
> + index.
> + </para>
> + </listitem>
Perhaps that last part could be "and searches over IN-lists in a b-tree index".
It might be technically less correct, but I'd expect that it gives more people
the right idea.
> + <para>
> + <link
> + linkend="app-pgcreatesubscriber"><application>pg_createsubscriber</application></link>,
> + a utility that logical replicas from physical standbys
> + </para>
There's a verb missing: "a utility that *creates* logical replicas..."
> + <para>
> + <link
> + linkend="pgupgrade"><application>pg_upgrade</application></link> now
> + preserves replication slots on both publishers and subscribers
> + </para>
I wonder if we should omit "on both publishers and subscribers".
It preserves replication slots anywhere, right?
> + <listitem>
> + <para>
> + New client-side connection option, <link
> + linkend="libpq-connect-sslnegotiation"><literal>sslnegotiation=direct</literal></link>,
> + that allows direct TLS handshakes that avoids a round-trip negotation.
> + </para>
> + </listitem>
It should be "that avoid". Plural.
Yours,
Laurenz Albe
