Dear David,
> The main thing I noted is that our synopsis is simply wrong regarding the
> optionality of the --database option. I went with a fix that included only
> showing the two mandatory options and adding a paragraph to usage explaining
> that --database exists and how to use it. Our existing example also covers
> that common usage.
According to the code, -D and -P is anyway needed, but -d can be omitted when -P
contians dbname option. And you wanted to follow the rule, right?
IIUC shorter synopsis is always welcomed.
> It took me a bit, and reading implementation code, to understand what was meant
> by "Additional recovery parameters are added to avoid ...". I decided that
> detail seemed unnecessary for the user-facing documentation - supposedly they
> will never see the recovery file if everything works OK (and if they do the
> various empty string settings should be reasonably self-evident). If we do
> want to keep it I'll try to find a better wording.
To confirm; users can run SHOW command after the conversion and they can see
our setting. Do you think it is a user-facing?
Here are my comments. (I ran Grammarly to check your sentences)
01.
Your patch breaks 80-column-per-line rule. Please check it.
02.
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+ The minimal command shown above...
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"shown" can be removed.
03.
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+ then created using auto-generated names, which can be overriden
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s/overriden/overridden/.
04.
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+ using the corresponding long-form command-line options, once each per database.
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"," and "each" can be removed.
05.
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+ does not perform an initial data copy. Instead it relies on a LSN-based
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Latter sentence can be "Inseted, it relies on an LSN-based..."
06.
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+ <para>
+ Note, the configuration setting <literal>port</literal> in this file is effectively ignored
+ as <application>pg_createsubscriber</application> always specifies the target listening port
+ on the <application>pg_ctl</application> command-line.
+ Use the <option>-p</option> option to specify which port the target server should listen on.
</para>
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Can you clarify the <literal>port</literal> in the config file is ignored only
while the pg_createsuscriber commands?
07.
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+ <application>pg_createsubscriber</application> is designed have full and
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s/is designed have/is designed to have/.
Best regards,
Hayato Kuroda
FUJITSU LIMITED
