On Fri, Feb 7, 2025 at 12:05 PM Peter Smith <smithpb2250@gmail.com> wrote:
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>
> I've had a go at rewording this paragraph in the 0002 patch.
>
The change in 0001 looks odd after seeing it in HTML format. We should
either add one empty line between two paragraphs otherwise it doesn't
appear good. Did you see multi-paragraphs in any other column
definitions?
For the 0002 patch, I find the following changes as improvements,
*
<para>
- Note that for slots on the standby
to
+ For standby slots
*
On standby, this is useful for slots
- that are being synced from a primary server (whose
- <structfield>synced</structfield> field is <literal>true</literal>)
- so they know when the slot stopped being synchronized.
to
This helps standby slots
+ track when synchronization was interrupted.
Other than that, I find the current wording okay.
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With Regards,
Amit Kapila.
