On 12 March 2015 at 21:28, Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us> wrote:
> Robert Haas <robertmhaas@gmail.com> writes:
>> I took a look at this patch today and noticed that it incorporates not
>> only documentation for the new functionality it adds, but also for the
>> custom-scan functionality whose documentation I previously excluded
>> from commit on the grounds that it needed more work, especially to
>> improve the English. That decision was not popular at the time, and I
>> think we need to remedy it before going further with this. I had
>> hoped that someone else would care about this work enough to help with
>> the documentation, but it seems not, so today I went through the
>> documentation in this patch, excluded all of the stuff specific to
>> custom joins, and heavily edited the rest. The result is attached.
>
> Looks good; I noticed one trivial typo --- please s/returns/return/ under
> ExecCustomScan. Also, perhaps instead of just "set ps_ResultTupleSlot"
> that should say "fill ps_ResultTupleSlot with the next tuple in the
> current scan direction".
Also:
s/initalization/initialization/
--
Thom
