Re: 21.3 Template database - Mailing list pgsql-docs

From Tom Lane
Subject Re: 21.3 Template database
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Msg-id 24976.1438697919@sss.pgh.pa.us
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In response to 21.3 Template database  (Dmitry Igrishin <dmitigr@gmail.com>)
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Dmitry Igrishin <dmitigr@gmail.com> writes:
> The sentence of 2nd paragraph says:
> "This is particularly handy when restoring a pg_dump dump"
> I suggest to add apostrophe:
> "This is particularly handy when restoring a pg_dump's dump"

> The sentece of 5th paragraph says:
> "The principal limitation is that no other sessions can be connected
> to the source database while it is being copied. CREATE
> DATABASE will fail if any other connection exists when it starts;
> during the copy operation, new connections to the source database are
> prevented."
> I suggest to get rid from redundant phrase:
> "The principal limitation is that no other sessions can be connected to the
> source database while it is being copied and CREATE DATABASE will fail if
> any other connection exists when it starts."

TBH, both of those seem to read worse to me than what's there now.

            regards, tom lane


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