Op 13-10-2022 om 23:28 schreef Bruce Momjian:
> On Tue, Sep 13, 2022 at 03:02:34PM +0100, Simon Riggs wrote:
>> Thanks Robert. I've tried to accommodate all of your thoughts, plus Alvaro's.
>>
>> New v5 attached.
>>
>> Happy to receive further comments.
>
> I liked this patch very much. It gives details on a lot of the
> internals we expose to users. Some of my changes were:
>
> * tightening the wording
> * restructuring the flow
> * splitting out user-visible details (prepared transactions) from
> internals, e.g., xid, vxid, subtransactions
> * adding references from places in our docs to these new sections
> [xact.diff]
I think that
'This chapter explains how the control the reliability of'
should be:
'This chapter explains how to control the reliability of'
And in these lines:
+ together in a transactional manner. The commands <command>PREPARE
+ TRANSACTION</command>, <command>COMMIT PREPARED</command> and
+ <command>ROLLBACK PREPARED</command>. Two-phase transactions
'The commands'
should be
'The commands are'
thanks,
Erik Rijkers
> I plan to apply this and backpatch it to all supported versions since
> these details apply to all versions. These docs should enable our users
> to much better understand and monitor Postgres.
>
> Updated patch attached.
