On Thu, May 16, 2019 at 05:11:37PM +0300, Liudmila Mantrova wrote:
> I have noticed imperfect grammar in a couple of sgml files, please consider
> a small patch (attached).
Thanks, Liudmila for caring about such matters.
> <para>
> - Transaction which last more than <replaceable>limit</replaceable> milliseconds
> + Transactions that last more than <replaceable>limit</replaceable> milliseconds
> are counted and reported separately, as <firstterm>late</firstterm>.
> </para>
I don't see much of a difference between "which" or "that" in this
context, and you are right about the plural for "Transactions". Any
native English speaker around or anybody with an extra opinion?
> <para>
> Of the two operator classes for type <type>point</type>,
> <literal>quad_point_ops</literal> is the default. <literal>kd_point_ops</literal>
> - supports the same operators but uses a different index data structure which
> + supports the same operators but uses a different index data structure that
> may offer better performance in some applications.
> </para>
Same here.
> @@ -447,9 +447,9 @@ typedef struct spgChooseOut
> type that was to be inserted into the index.
> <structfield>leafDatum</structfield> is a value of
> <structname>spgConfigOut</structname>.<structfield>leafType</structfield>
> - type which is initially an result of method
> + type, which is initially a result of method
I actually would not add a comma here, as the follow-up expression
gives more details about the leaf type previously mentioned.
> <function>compress</function> applied to <structfield>datum</structfield>
> - when method <function>compress</function> is provided, or same value as
> + when method <function>compress</function> is provided, or the same value as
I would do what you suggest here.
> Converts the data item into a format suitable for physical storage in
> a leaf tuple of index page. It accepts
> <structname>spgConfigIn</structname>.<structfield>attType</structfield>
> - value and return
> + value and returns
This one is right. Good catch.
--
Michael
