On Sun, Jul 04, 2004 at 03:11:26PM -0000, Greg Sabino Mullane wrote:
> Overall, a good start, but the tone and the style needs some work.
> We should get someone who does this sort of thing for a living
> to help out, e.g. a marketer or a proofreader. Anyone know someone?
I think most of this text comes verbatim (or close to it) from
advocacy.postgresql.org ... the text there should be fixed too!
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