typos in 'website 'About'-page - Mailing list pgsql-www

From Erik Rijkers
Subject typos in 'website 'About'-page
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Msg-id c6bde45d0bebb250be2383c1be2b8c85@xs4all.nl
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In
   https://www.postgresql.org/about/

'Below is an inexhaustive of various features'  should be
'Below is an inexhaustive list of various features'


And the following sentence seems altogether incorrect:

'As of the version 11 release in October 2018, PostgreSQL conforms to at 
least 160 of the 179 mandatory features for SQL:2011 Core conformance, 
where as of this writing, no relational database meets full conformance 
with this standard.'

I think the problem-phrase is  'where as of this writing' (fixing the 
spelling to 'whereas' doesn't really help) so I suggest to break the 
above into two sentences:

'As of the version 11 release in October 2018, PostgreSQL conforms to at 
least 160 of the 179 mandatory features for SQL:2011 Core conformance.  
As of this writing, no relational database meets full conformance with 
this standard.'

I hope native speakers will correct me if I'm wrong.


thanks,

Erik Rijkers



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