> On 23 May 2019, at 15:18, Erik Rijkers <er@xs4all.nl> wrote:
>
> In
> https://www.postgresql.org/about/
>
> 'Below is an inexhaustive of various features' should be
> 'Below is an inexhaustive list of various features’
>
>
> And the following sentence seems altogether incorrect:
>
> 'As of the version 11 release in October 2018, PostgreSQL conforms to at least 160 of the 179 mandatory features for
SQL:2011Core conformance, where as of this writing, no relational database meets full conformance with this standard.'
>
> I think the problem-phrase is 'where as of this writing' (fixing the spelling to 'whereas' doesn't really help) so I
suggestto break the above into two sentences:
>
> 'As of the version 11 release in October 2018, PostgreSQL conforms to at least 160 of the 179 mandatory features for
SQL:2011Core conformance. As of this writing, no relational database meets full conformance with this standard.'
>
> I hope native speakers will correct me if I'm wrong.
While not a native speaker, I do agree that your proposed wording is easier to
read so I went ahead and applied that together with the other fix. Thanks for
reporting!
cheers ./daniel
