On 5/19/23 11:02 AM, Justin Clift wrote:
> The sentence after that starts:
>
> "This release also adds ..."
>
> With the one following it starting with "This includes ...". Together,
> they a bit unwieldy too. Maybe something like this instead?
Thanks -- I broke this one up into two sentences.
> "This release also adds several new security-oriented connection
> parameters for clients, including ..."
>
> ---
>
> Would this:
>
> "You can now also set `sslrootcert` to `system` to specify that
> PostgreSQL can use the trusted certificate authority (CA) store
> for that operating system."
>
> Be better as?
>
> "You can now also set `sslrootcert` to `system` to instruct
> PostgreSQL to use the trusted certificate authority (CA) store
> provided by the operating system."
>
> ---
I took this suggestion, with modifications.
> Nothing else is jumping out at me. It all seems pretty good. :)
Thanks!
