Re: PostgreSQL 16 Beta 1 release announcement draft - Mailing list pgsql-advocacy

From Justin Clift
Subject Re: PostgreSQL 16 Beta 1 release announcement draft
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Msg-id 47d8c7833c7bb98850448ca651cdf44d@postgresql.org
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In response to PostgreSQL 16 Beta 1 release announcement draft  ("Jonathan S. Katz" <jkatz@postgresql.org>)
Responses Re: PostgreSQL 16 Beta 1 release announcement draft
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On 2023-05-19 14:18, Jonathan S. Katz wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> Attached is a draft of the release announcement for PostgreSQL 16 Beta
> 1. The goal of this announcement is to get people excited about
> testing the beta and highlight many of the new features.
> 
> Please review for inaccuracies, omissions, and other suggestions / 
> errors.

Typo:

   "PostgreSQL 16 continues to give users to the ability grant privileged 
..."

Should be:

   "PostgreSQL 16 continues to give users the ability to grant privileged 
..."

Hmmm, upon re-reading that whole sentence (not just my fragment of it 
above)
seems pretty unwieldy.  A better one isn't springing to mind though. ;)

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Should this:

   "Additionally, starting with release, logical replication ..."

Have the word "this" before "release"?

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Typo:

   "... use the authenticated credentials to connected to other 
services."

Should be:

   "... use the authenticated credentials to connect to other services."

The sentence after that starts:

   "This release also adds ..."

With the one following it starting with "This includes ...".  Together,
they a bit unwieldy too.  Maybe something like this instead?

   "This release also adds several new security-oriented connection
    parameters for clients, including ..."

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Would this:

   "You can now also set `sslrootcert` to `system` to specify that
    PostgreSQL can use the trusted certificate authority (CA) store
    for that operating system."

Be better as?

   "You can now also set `sslrootcert` to `system` to instruct
    PostgreSQL to use the trusted certificate authority (CA) store
    provided by the operating system."

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Nothing else is jumping out at me.  It all seems pretty good. :)

+ Justin



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