On 08/01/2016 03:07 PM, David G. Johnston wrote: > https://www.postgresql.org/account/comments/new/9.6/textsearch.html/ > > Would suggest: > > Filling out out this form will send an email from > david.g.johnston@gmail.com <mailto:david.g.johnston@gmail.com> to the > public pgsql-docs mailing list. > > The whole second sentence seems unhelpful. The following points should > be addressed instead. > > Is the submitting email address copied and, related, would they have to > subscribe to pgsql-docs to track the discussion (assuming that people > leave the CC: list intact, which not everyone does...)?
I'm a bit confused about what you are suggesting here - the above seems to be a mix of a rewording of some of the text on the page and some actual questions on behaviour?
The re-wording I suggested left me asking the subsequent couple of questions. Depending on the answers to them additional text may be desirable. In any case removing "
Expect further discussions to happen on this list after the submission is done.
" seems worth considering. It does make the text a bit short - but if the two questions raised are addressed we'd actually come out a bit longer and considerably ahead in specifics.
