Re: Sponsorship Page Language - Mailing list pgsql-www

From Thom Brown
Subject Re: Sponsorship Page Language
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In response to Sponsorship Page Language  ("Jonathan S. Katz" <jonathan.katz@excoventures.com>)
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On 11 January 2013 15:55, Jonathan S. Katz <jonathan.katz@excoventures.com> wrote:
Hello,

When looking at the sponsorship page (http://www.postgresql.org/about/sponsors/) I noticed a few things regarding the language that I've attempted to clean up with this patch.

The first regards the ordering of the sponsors - they are ordered randomly, not alphabetically, so I corrected the language up top.

The second has to do with the language on the bottom of the page discussing the sponsorship levels and selection process.  I reworded the sentences to more clearly state the purpose of the sponsorship levels are and how they are selected, maintaing a link to the guidelines on the wiki.

s/Sponsors are display/Sponsors are displayed/

s/using following/following/ although perhaps "in accordance with"

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Thom

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