On Mon, Mar 16, 2009 at 10:12 AM, Guillaume Lelarge
<guillaume@lelarge.info> wrote:
> Dave Page a écrit :
>> On Sun, Mar 15, 2009 at 2:55 PM, Guillaume Lelarge
>> <guillaume@lelarge.info> wrote:
>>> Dave Page a écrit :
>> [...]
>>> Comments?
>>
>> I need to do a pass over it to tweak some of the phrasing. Can I edit
>> the original without causing you problems?
>>
>
> Yes, you can do it. I have nothing to edit on it right now.
OK, I've updated it. You should probably try not to refer to the user
as 'one' quite so often - technically it is correct, but few people
ever talk like that (except possibly the Queen :-) ).
Some additional reviews would be good though!!
--
Dave Page
EnterpriseDB UK: http://www.enterprisedb.com
