Dave Page a écrit :
> On Mon, Mar 16, 2009 at 10:12 AM, Guillaume Lelarge
> <guillaume@lelarge.info> wrote:
>> Dave Page a écrit :
>>> On Sun, Mar 15, 2009 at 2:55 PM, Guillaume Lelarge
>>> <guillaume@lelarge.info> wrote:
>>>> Dave Page a écrit :
>>> [...]
>>>> Comments?
>>> I need to do a pass over it to tweak some of the phrasing. Can I edit
>>> the original without causing you problems?
>>>
>> Yes, you can do it. I have nothing to edit on it right now.
>
> OK, I've updated it. You should probably try not to refer to the user
> as 'one' quite so often - technically it is correct, but few people
> ever talk like that (except possibly the Queen :-) ).
>
I didn't know that. Funny :)
> Some additional reviews would be good though!!
>
OK. Do you want that I put it into shape for inclusion in the website?
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