>> I'd expand that to -
>>
>> With the continued success of our community project site
>> www.pgfoundry.org we also have the following projects developing
>> additional add-on features to offer expanded functionality to what
>> is included in the main PostgreSQL release. These features may be
>> too cutting edge to be considered part of the main project or may
>> just cater to a small market.
>
> Nice expansion :)
>
> I'd cut that last sentence, as it emphasizes a gap between the core
> and pgfoundry that it's our long-term goal to close.
The only part I don't like is:
These features may be
>> too cutting edge to be considered part of the main project or may
>> just cater to a small market.
It isn't required, nor is it actually acurate in a lot of circumstances.
How about:
With the continued success of our community project site
www.pgfoundry.org we also have many [sub|side|associate|parallel]
projects developing additional features to offer expanded functionality
to what is included in the main PostgreSQL release.
Remember we are limited in our PR length :)
Sincerely,
Joshua D. Drake
>
> Cheers,
> D
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