Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release

From: Lukas Kahwe Smith
Subject: Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release
Date: ,
Msg-id: 44F5CA11.7090108@pooteeweet.org
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In response to: First Draft of 8.2 Release  (Josh Berkus)
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First Draft of 8.2 Release  (Josh Berkus, )
 Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  (Oleg Bartunov, )
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  Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  (Shane Ambler, )
 Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  ("Joshua D. Drake", )
  Re: Quote Sources: First Draft of 8.2 Release  (Josh Berkus, )
 Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  (Mike Ellsworth, )
 Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  ("Magnus Hagander", )
 Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  (Chris Browne, )
  Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  (Bruce Momjian, )
   Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  ("Joshua D. Drake", )
    Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  (Bruce Momjian, )
     Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  ("Joshua D. Drake", )
      Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  (David Fetter, )
       Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  ("Joshua D. Drake", )
      Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  (Shane Ambler, )
       Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  (David Fetter, )
        Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  ("Joshua D. Drake", )
       Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  (Peter Eisentraut, )
        Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  (Shane Ambler, )
         Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  ("Joshua D. Drake", )
       Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  (Chris Browne, )
        Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  (Ron Mayer, )
         Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  ("Jonah H. Harris", )
          Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  (Josh Berkus, )
           Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  ("Joshua D. Drake", )
            Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  (Ron Mayer, )
             Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  ("Harald Armin Massa", )
   Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release  (Josh Berkus, )

Josh Berkus schrieb:
> Folks,
>
> .... is in Press CVS:
> http://pgfoundry.org/scm/?group_id=1000047
>
> or in Docs for those of you who don't have CVS access to the Press project:
> http://pgfoundry.org/docman/view.php/1000047/233/first_draft.txt
>
> Your contributions to making it a good release are very appreciated.
> Please read the notes at the top of the draft *before* commenting.
>
> Particularly, I'm looking for help on the best quotes for the release.
> Bruce, you willing to own something like the quote I attribute to you?  If
> so, how would you re-write it?

"PostgreSQL is also the first database to offer and early implementation
this radically new join algorithm valuable for data mining and
consolidation."

this sentence is bumpy .. "and" => "an" "this" => "of this"

not sure if its common to address readers with "you" in press releases.

regards,
Lukas



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