Chris Browne wrote:
> Here's a patch to add in the material on replication recently
> discussed on pgsql.docs. I'm not thrilled that there were only a few
> comments made; I'd be happy to see "slicing and dicing" to see this
> made more useful.
s/e.g. -/e.g.,/
s/ - /–/
The indentation of the SGML file seems at odds with our conventions (we
don't use tabs, for one thing.)
You mention this:
> <para> Common methods include having triggers on tables,
> capturing SQL statements, and capturing transaction log (WAL)
> updates </para>
However you don't mention anything about WAL captures. Mentioning that
PITR is one of these would be good.
In the last few paragraphs, the title is about Postgres-R but then you
comment on Slony-II. Should the title mention both?
> <para> As a result of those problems, Slony-II efforts have fallen
> off somewhat. </para>
s/those/these/ ?
Otherwise looks good to my untrained eyes.
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