Hi,
On Wed, Oct 30, 2024 at 06:21:04PM +0900, Michael Paquier wrote:
> On Wed, Oct 30, 2024 at 07:26:07AM +0000, Bertrand Drouvot wrote:
> > 1 === Nit
> >
> > s/Permutations like this one/Permutations like the following commented out one/ ?
> >
> > 2 ===
> >
> > s/back its result/back its result once woken up/ ?
> >
> > 3 ===
> >
> > s/faster than the wait/before the SQL function doing the wait returns its result/ ?
> >
> > With 2 === and 3 === I think it's easier to "link" both sentences that way.
>
> What do you think about the updated version attached?
Thanks! LGTM.
Regards,
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Bertrand Drouvot
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