> Agreed. v7 attached: three paragraphs collapsed into one, close to your
> wording. I kept three bits from v6:
Only nit I have is:
which <literal>standby_replay</literal> waits for and the
+ other standby modes ultimately depend on.
The "ultimately depends on" is not very clear. I would change it to:
"which <literal>standby_replay</literal> waits for, and could also
delay waits in
the other standby modes."
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Sami Imseih
Amazon Web Services (AWS)
