Hi,
Thanks for the updated patch.
> > I see what you mean, but I don't think the problem is the word "each." I
> > think the problem is the use of passive voice. What do you think about
> > something like
> >
> > Each backend will execute the registered shmem_startup_hook shortly
> > after it attaches to shared memory.
That's much better, thanks.
I think the patch could use another pair of eyes, ideally from a
native English speaker. But if no one will express any objections for
a while I suggest merging it.
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Best regards,
Aleksander Alekseev
