On Wed, Sep 8, 2021 at 12:24 PM Peter Smith <smithpb2250@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> v2 --> v3
>
> The subscription_parameter names are now split into 2 groups using
> Amit's suggestion [1] on how to categorise them.
>
> I also made some grammar improvements to their descriptions.
>
I have made minor edits to your first patch and it looks good to me. I
am not sure what exactly Tom has in mind related to grammatical
improvements, so it is better if he can look into that part of your
proposal (basically second patch
v4-0002-PG-Docs-Create-Subscription-options-rewording).
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With Regards,
Amit Kapila.
