Minor language edits for PostgreSQL 14 Release Notes - Mailing list pgsql-docs

From Elena Indrupskaya
Subject Minor language edits for PostgreSQL 14 Release Notes
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Msg-id 38555778-a56b-4aca-2581-e05582fc9bcf@postgrespro.ru
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Responses Re: Minor language edits for PostgreSQL 14 Release Notes  (Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>)
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Hello everyone,

I noticed minor language inaccuracies/inconsistencies in PostgreSQL 14 Release Notes (https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/release-14.html). A patch to fix them is attached.
One of the replacements changes

"which reports <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity" to
"to report <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity"

because "to report" is more consistent with the rest of the text (or just add a comma before "which").

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Elena Indrupskaya
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Postgres Professional http://www.postgrespro.comtext.
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