The Hermit Hacker said:
>
> Ack...I wish you had given a suggestion on redoing that 'long'
> sentence, but I've read through it several times and can't think of a good
> way to cut it in half :( Its going out as is...
>
> > > database system. While some of the more esoteric features that
> > > Postgres supported as a research system are being replaced with many
> > > of the same features found in modern commercial systems, PostgreSQL
> > > will continue to offer its unique, extensible, object-oriented
> > > architecture.
> >
> > This last sentence is too long and hard to follow. I think this should be
> > broken into two sentences.
> >
How about:
Some of the more esoteric features that Postgres supported as a
research system are being replaced with more generally useful
features, such as those found in modern commercial systems. However,
PostgreSQL will continue to offer its unique, extensible,
object-oriented architecture.
(Hope I'm not to late for the release... :)
- -Brandon :)
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