On Tue, Sep 9, 2014 at 03:40:45PM -0400, David Johnston wrote:
> Minor corrections:
>
> First block: "
> In the first section of this chapter, we
> describe how to set configuration parameters"
>
> - remove the comma
>
> Second Block:
> - placement of the colon inside or outside of the emphasis tag is inconsistent
> (string, unit, enum are inside; boolean and numeric are outside)
> - units: "An numeric value..." -> maybe "An unadorned numeric value...
>
> Third block:
> "Hash marks (<literal>#</literal>) designate the remainder of lines as
> comments." -> "...designate the remainder of the line as a comment." I read
> this at first as "remaining lines [in the file] ... "
>
> "To embed a single quote in a parameter value, write either two quotes
> (preferred) or backslash-quote." -> remove the comma
> "Querying this view is the sames as" -> "the same as"
I agree all of the above are improvements, and changed.
> "In addition to setting global defaults or attaching" <- add a comma after
> "defaults"
I didn't like this change as it causes too many comma phrases.
Attaches are the changes since yesterday's patch. The full patch is at:
ftp://momjian.us/postgresql/mypatches/config.diff
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