Folks,
There's a 4th draft up. I made the following changes:
-- I replaced the technical summary in the first paragraph with a "business
summary", explaining what the new features *mean* to Joe User. This was
on the advice of GreenPlum's public relations staff.
-- Moved a sentence from the 2nd P to the 1st P
-- Replaced Lance's quote.
Given that time is short, and we could tinker with this forever, I'm going
to close re-writes and declare it final on Saturday afternoon (PDT). So
get your edits in now!
--
--Josh
Josh Berkus
Aglio Database Solutions
San Francisco
