[Minor] Improve reading in "1.2 Architectural Fundamentals " tutorial - Mailing list pgsql-docs

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Subject [Minor] Improve reading in "1.2 Architectural Fundamentals " tutorial
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Msg-id 179028157720.1026196.11734567258850512063@wrigleys.postgresql.org
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Responses Re: [Minor] Improve reading in "1.2 Architectural Fundamentals " tutorial
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The following documentation comment has been logged on the website:

Page: https://www.postgresql.org/docs/18/tutorial-arch.html
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Where it says:
"As is typical of client/server applications, the client and the server can
be on different hosts. In that case they communicate over a TCP/IP network
connection. You should keep this in mind, because the files that can be
accessed on a client machine might not be accessible **(or might only be
accessible using a different file name)** on the database server machine."

The distinction "(or might only be accessible using a different file name)"
does not add to the concept and degrades reading. I propose to remove it:
"As is typical of client/server applications, the client and the server can
be on different hosts. In that case they communicate over a TCP/IP network
connection. You should keep this in mind, because the files that can be
accessed on a client machine might not be accessible on the database server
machine."

Thanks!




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