Neil Conway <neilc@samurai.com> writes:
> I've applied the attached patch to CVS HEAD. It improves the
> postmaster reference page, the locale / character set docs, adds some
> more cross-references to the locale / character set docs, and makes a
> few minor fixes elsewhere. Any suggestions for future improvement are
> welcome.
Looks good ... one trivial quibble:
> ! This option is equivalent to setting <literal>listen_addresses</> in
> ! <filename>postgresql.conf</>.
> --- 171,185 ----
> ! Specifying this option is equivalent to setting the <xref
> ! linkend="guc-listen-addresses">.
"... setting the listen_addresses" seems a bit too brief to me; in a
medium that doesn't mark up the crossref at all, it'd seem disconnected.
I'd have written at least "the <xref linkend="guc-listen-addresses">
configuration parameter".
Just MHO though, others might see it differently.
regards, tom lane
