when transaction commit begins - Mailing list pgsql-docs

I'd like to reword this line in the Asynch commit docs:

   "when transaction commit begins."

Transaction commit is when the transaction ends, so using the word begin
in that way is confusing.

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     <xref linkend="guc-synchronous-commit">, which can be changed in
any of
     the ways that a configuration parameter can be set.  The mode used
for
     any one transaction depends on the value of
!    <varname>synchronous_commit</varname> when transaction commit
begins.
    </para>

    <para>
--- 216,223 ----
     <xref linkend="guc-synchronous-commit">, which can be changed in
any of
     the ways that a configuration parameter can be set.  The mode used
for
     any one transaction depends on the value of
!    <varname>synchronous_commit</varname> at the time of transaction
commit,
!    so <command>SET LOCAL</> can also be used.
    </para>

    <para>


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