On 2020/11/07 0:42, Fujii Masao wrote:
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> On 2020/10/31 2:06, John Naylor wrote:
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>> On Fri, Oct 30, 2020 at 12:48 PM Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us <mailto:tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>> wrote:
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>> John Naylor <john.naylor@enterprisedb.com <mailto:john.naylor@enterprisedb.com>> writes:
>> > Okay, along those lines here's a patch using "this view" in a new paragraph
>> > for simplicity.
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>> Basically OK with me, but ...
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>> <quibble>
>> It seems fairly weird to use a nonspecific reference first and then a
>> specific one. That is, I'd expect to read "The pg_settings view ..."
>> and then "This view ...", not the other way around. So we could
>> put this para second, or put it first but make this para say
>> "The pg_settings view ..." while the existing text gets reduced to
>> "This view ...".
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>> Or just make them both say "This view ..." so we don't have to have
>> this discussion again the next time somebody wants to add a para here.
>> </quibble>
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>> Okay, how's this?
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> Looks good to me. Barring any objection, I will commit the patch.
Pushed. Thanks!
Regards,
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Fujii Masao
Advanced Computing Technology Center
Research and Development Headquarters
NTT DATA CORPORATION
